ooo my good, this is good!

Toxic environment isn't it? Let's be fair though, Undertale is going through a massive social media boom at the moment. To say the least there's alot of bad parodies on the web. This is a good one and I commend you on that. But right now the problem is on both sides so that's perhaps the reason it's not fully appreciated. There are those who are tired of seeing it and those who want so much more. I tend to lean on the more because I'm drawn to good story above anything else. As a culture we tend to become obsessed and celebrate the things we love and share that with other people, however like a born again christian some tend to take a narcissistic stance against others joining in or celebrating in ways they don't favor IE the Steven Universe incident. In general the other group who's tired of Undertale like many franchises before don't hate the game, hate the fandom and at times becomes a grouped stereotype. So my point I suppose is don't let the community's hatred overcome your passions in life and keep doing what you love. Thank you for reading.

Good colors and animations,but this obsession for this game...

Good animation, but fuck puns, and fuck the obsession around this sub-par game.

Before is say anything, this cartoon was very easy to look at. You have a very appealing style, beautiful colours, very nicely detailed backgrounds with alot of life in them and this short in particular was very well animated. On a technical level, this was incredibly well done and i commend you on your artistic efforts, everything in that regard was very well crafted. With that said, i'm sick of seeing Undertale parodies on this website, i've seen more Undertale parodies over the last 3 months than i've seen Minecraft parodies over the last 5 years, and it's plaguing the website. I wouldn't mind so much, and im sorry to make this statement on your video in particular but it genuinely saddens me when people, who have worked on a story and concept or have written a comedic piece and has the artistic skills to back those up with their animation skills, are pushed out of the top 5, simply because they couldn't cater to people looking for Undertale parodies or fan-films. I have no problem with the game, and 'm not saying that all Undertale parodies, or parodies in general are bad, but the majority of the ones that are getting the front page spot are ones that are less than a minute long and having nothing to offer but a squirt of try-hardy quirkiness. The game is expansive and theres alot to it, i know, so why aren't people doing more with the material at hand, theres alot to be done and it seems that alot of people are just content with the bare minimum simply because it is their favourite game or they ride along the fandom ready to soak up any kind of Undertale based content whether it be good, bad or mediocre. In this case, you made a pun and pulled a funny face.

I appreciate the effort that went into the technical area of this cartoon, i'm not specifically targetting you when i criticize the writing in most of these parodies. You are not the prime example of a bad Undertale parody or why i hate fan-films of the game, as this is something that has been apparent on Newgrounds for several months now, but it's getting obnoxious to see it so often and with so little attention going into to making it interesting, engaging or funny. Please do not take this review to heart, and i'm sorry if i cause any offense, i'm just trying to make it clear that i don't think this type of content is acceptable with the type of quality control that is on Newgrounds nowadays.

Good Luck with your future projects, i hop to see more of your work soon. Stay Safe