Awesome, man!!!

Dude, awesome! Cool idea, plus good animation and a rockin' soundtrack = Great job!!! THIS is what we should be learning in school, not 6 CO2 + 6 H2O + Light --> C6H12O6 + 6 O2!!!!!!

Okay, Nice.

Very well done, I only have two complaints. The first being that the cartoon is too short, True these things require time, but all in all the project could've actually been made a little better with such time. The other complaint is the sound choices, Music was Epic, Sword slashing was nice, but that last part when he is walking.. It sounds like he is wearing high heels, and unless you want to break open a can of "This is why he is wearing such and such" I would try and pick a better walking sound.

Love it

I love the art style! XD its really good!!!!
Story 10/10
Art 10/10
length 8/10
Its very good I wish it were longer I understand when you have time crunches though. A little more animation or bone rigging would have been good too, but besides those tiny things you did an AMAZING job!

Very Good

It's definitely one of the better Flashes I've seen in a while. I just expected it to be a lot longer. I thought he would start making a bunch of other things on the paper and eventually the whole city would be destroyed.

Oh well, it still has really good, brush-drawn animation which I prefer over the standard line-drawn. Good job.

amazing work

this was an amazing flash, but i really with there would've been a bit more work on the action sequence, it was very short and just wasn't substantial in my opinion. but if not that then maybe just add more onto the thing entirely, a longer story with multiple battles and a teenager frantically trying to change th flow of battle. i dont know thats just my idea on it. but altogether great work, excellent animation and everything really, maybe a more colorful hero but still, 9/10 5/5 waiting for another!